Talk:New York State Route 114/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 2) Expand the lead by adding more descrpitive and historical information about the route
 * 3) "far east end" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
 * 4) The sentence "NY 114 is the furthest east signed north-south state route in all of New York. " sounds awkward, rephrase
 * 5) "ritzy" and "playground of the rich and famous"? Try using different words, the latter sounds like advertising
 * 6) "It quickly sheds its side street status" sounds awkward, rephrase
 * 7) "appropriately leads to Sag Harbor": eliminante "appropiately"
 * 8) The sentence "After several miles, NY 114 once again finds itself in a town, this time Sag Harbor." sounds awkward, rewrite
 * 9) The last two sentences in the second paragraph of the route description would fit better in the history section
 * 10) "route.Shelter": add space following period
 * 11) In next sentence, remove comma after "South Ferry Company"
 * 12) "turning several turns"? sounds awkward
 * 13) The history section of the article looks a little short, is there any additional information that can be added?
 * 14) Are the missing mileposts in the major intersections table known?

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 02:17, 2 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Done. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 17:29, 2 March 2009 (UTC)


 * In answer to the 14th comment, I think if they were known, they wouldn't be missing. DanTD (talk) 17:57, 2 March 2009 (UTC)