Talk:New York State Route 18A/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Are the exact years the route was created and decommissioned known?
 * 2) If possible, try to get a map for the infobox showing the former route
 * 3) In second sentence of lead, wikilink individual towns
 * 4) Begin last sentence of lead with "As"
 * 5) "more populated district"? sounds awkward
 * 6) Replace "for a northward one" with " by heading north"
 * 7) "trans-Erie County highway"? sounds awkward
 * 8) Replace "beginning a parallel with" with "running parallel to"
 * 9) In last sentence of route description, remove comma after later and "ending"
 * 10) Combine second and third sentences in history
 * 11) In fourth sentence of history, do not need to refer to NY 18 as extended highway
 * 12) In same sentence, replace "all" with "them"
 * 13) Reomve "that stretched" from fifth sentence in history
 * 14) "and most of it as New York State Route 75"? need to rephrase
 * 15) If possible, try to get a picture of the route as it looks today or a historical picture from when the route existed
 * 16) Fix the spelling of "of" in Yahoo Maps reference

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 15:44, 1 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Done. Sorry for the delay. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 14:33, 4 February 2009 (UTC)