Talk:New York State Route 286/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 16:46, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Is the exact year the route created known?
 * No, between 1947 and 1952 is the best I can do based on the resources that I have. I would like to narrow it down to either late 1940s or early 1950s, but I don't have a 1950 map.
 * 1) "from said roads" sounds awkward. Is there another way of saying this?
 * Attempted to reword it.
 * 1) Can some more descriptive information about the route be added to the lead?
 * Added a little.
 * 1) Do not use "then" in describing progression of route.
 * Resolved; I believe this is the last of my GANs that does this.
 * 1) "East of Blossom": indicate that it is Blossom Road.
 * Changed to "this junction" since saying "Blossom Road" twice in six words is too repetitive IMO.
 * 1) "amongst open fields intended for farming" sounds awkward.
 * Reworded.
 * 1) "At the east end of Main" and "then followed Blossom", indicate what type of road it is (ie. street, road).
 * Done.
 * 1) Indicate that "Knollwood" is "Knollwood Drive".
 * Done.
 * 1) Are the names known for the roads in the Major intersections table?
 * Added where applicable.
 * Thanks for the review. –  T M F 17:09, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article now. Dough4872 (talk) 17:12, 18 June 2009 (UTC)