Talk:New York State Route 33A/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 00:29, 8 January 2011 (UTC) This is obviously the product of careful work. No disamb. links or broken links.
 * GA review (see here for criteria)

Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 16:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * what does "near the neighborhood of Lincoln Park" mean? In what neighborhood is the 33-33A junction located?
 * Removed not because it's bad wording, but because that name is rarely used anymore. –  T M F 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "NY 33A progresses onward, heading northeast through a residential neighborhood"->"NY 33A progresses northeast through a residential neighborhood"
 * Done, with a slight modification. –  T M F 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "The activity is mostly centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."->"The businesses are centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart, that is at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."
 * Reworded. –  T M F 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Are there any plans for future construction or improvements?
 * If there were any substantial future plans, they would be in the article already. –  T M F 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Nice photos. Thank you for donating them.
 * The first one isn't mine; it's from a Flickr user. –  T M F 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am placing the article on hold.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am placing the article on hold.