Talk:New York State Route 391/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Remove the picture from the infobox and place in the route description
 * 2) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 3) Is the exact year the route was formed known?
 * 4) Add some more information about the route and its history to the lead
 * 5) "several local roads, many of which lead to more homes"? sounds awkward. I don't think you need to mention the local roads lead to more homes
 * 6) Replace "gains the name" with "becomes"
 * 7) "the 219" sounds colliqual
 * 8) "fields are the main attractions"? sounds awkward, try rephrasing
 * 9) Last sentence of second paragraph of route description: "towards" should be singular
 * 10) In phrase "which follow the rest of the way", add "the route" after "follow"
 * 11) When the US 219 expressway was constructed in the 1970s and NY 391 was deisgnated, where were the original endpoints for NY 391?
 * 12) Place last sentece of history in preceding paragraph
 * 13) Remove "via an overlap with US 62" from parentheses
 * 14) In major intersections table, indicate US 219 junction is an interchange

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 15:25, 2 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Done. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 14:41, 4 February 2009 (UTC)