Talk:New York State Route 41/GA1

GA Review
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The article seems complete and well-written for the most part. A few things came up during the review:

I will place this nomination on hold to allow for these concerns to be addressed and/or discussed. Any questions and/or comments can be left here, as I have placed this page on my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 03:10, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Too many sentences begin with "Route 41" - some variety is needed
 * Done.
 * 1) wikilink "concurrent"
 * Done.
 * 1) "heads through twists and turns" - doesn't seem encyclopedic. Perhaps "turns several times"?
 * Done.
 * 1) "At an intersection with New York State Route 12, Route 41 turns off 206 and heads concurrent along Route 12." - I understand what this is saying, but I had to read it three times first. Can it be simplified and/or reworded?
 * Done.
 * 1) "New York State Route 221 terminates during the concurrency, which ends soon after." - I'm confused. If 221 terminates, doesn't this end the concurrency immediately?
 * Done.
 * 1) "In the 1920s, the road connecting the village of Skaneateles to the village of Homer via the east side of Skaneateles Lake was formerly a numbered state highway" - can the "formerly" be removed, as the sentence seems to be talking about the 1920s, when it was a numbered state highway?
 * Done.
 * 1) Likewise, in the next sentence, perhaps "was" instead of "had been"?
 * Done.
 * 1) Does the reference in "NY 41A" cover the whole sentence? If so, can it be moved to the end?
 * Done. (It does)
 * 1) Can you find out if User:Skudrafan1 took the picture for Image:Skaneateleslake41.jpg ? Currently, there is no source information.
 * User:Skudrafan1/Photos has it listed, I trust that he took it.
 * But it still needs source information, so contacting him and asking him to add the information would solve the problem. GaryColemanFan (talk) 21:07, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
 * User talk:Skudrafan1 - request made. Mitch 32(UP) 17:00, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Reference 17 is missing information.
 * Done.


 * Replies and dones have been made, hopefully you will agree with them. Mitch 32(UP) 03:24, 25 October 2008 (UTC)

I checked out Skudrafan1's image page. It states that he took the picture, so I added that information to the image description page. That takes care of the last concern, so I am promoting the article. GaryColemanFan (talk) 17:30, 27 October 2008 (UTC)