Talk:New York State Route 43/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 14:47, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "Massachusetts' Route 43", shouldn't it be Massachusetts Route 43?
 * From how I understand it, using "Massachusetts Route 43" would be a violation of WP:USSH. Hm...but then again, WP:USSH seems to indicate using it is acceptable. So, I'll change it.
 * 1) "embark on an overlap" sounds awkward, "use run concurrent" instead.
 * I didn't think "run concurrent" worked well there, so I reworded the sentence in a different way.
 * 1) In sentence "NY 43 serves as the main commercial strip through the hamlet, the largest location on the route since Averill Park.", add "which is" after the comma.
 * I'm not convinced it's necessary, but I added it anyway.
 * 1) The entire route description is sourced from Yahoo Maps. Can more sources be added?
 * There's nothing there that requires additional sourcing.
 * 1) "NY 43 truncated slightly on its western end " sounds awkward.
 * Had a word missing.
 * 1) Are the names known for the routes in the major intersections table?
 * Added where appropriate. Everything east of NY 66 north has no name due to the rural nature of the area.
 * Thanks for the review. –  T M F 20:14, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 00:42, 12 July 2009 (UTC)