Talk:New York State Route 9M/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Is it likely that an article for East Schroon River Road will be created? If not, remove redlink
 * 2) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 3) In lead, add "to" after "opposite"
 * 4) Mention when CR 64 was created in lead
 * 5) In first sentence of route description, wikilink Starbuckville, New York
 * 6) If this article is about County Route 64, is it nessecary to mention a different road that parallels it on the other side of the river?
 * 7) "the Schroon" sounds colliqual
 * 8) Switch order of last two sentences in first paragraph of route description and change information in past tense to present tense
 * 9) "which is progressing northward nearby" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
 * 10) "while re-entering forestry" also sounds awkward
 * 11) Is the picture in the route description even of the actual route? I would suggest trying to get a picture of the actual route itself
 * 12) In third sentence of history, replace "of" with "on"
 * 13) Are the exact years NY 9M was created and decommissioned known?
 * 14) "re-designated" should not be hyphened

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 15:08, 2 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Done. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 14:49, 4 February 2009 (UTC)