Talk:New York and Long Island Coignet Stone Company Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Move "Use mdy dates" below the hatnote.
 * Add alt text to every image being used.
 * "has a lot area of" - reword
 * Add a comma after "building's completion".
 * "In spite of" "Despite" (less wordy)
 * Add a serial comma after "coal yard".
 * "made an agreement" "agreed" (less wordy)
 * "Plans for the Whole Foods" - is "the" necessary?
 * Wikilink The New York Times.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 19:11, 9 July 2021 (UTC)