Talk:New Zealand at the 2014 Winter Paralympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 08:27, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I will take this up.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 08:27, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Overall a good lookng article but a few changes are needed before it can make GA status:
 * Can we get a source for NZ's Paralympic streak in the lead?
 * Sourced in the background section, per WP:LEAD there aren't supposed to be citations in the lead. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Likewise one for the Slalom win and the first sentence of the Background section
 * Same for here, it is sourced lower in in the article when discussed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't it be "the Chef de Mission"?
 * Yep, right, fixed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * The Disability criteria sentence is far too long and should be broken up
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * The sentence referring to Hall's Super G needs punctuation
 * I'm not seeing what punctuation is needed in"In the Men's Super-G he did not finish the single-run race." Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Is there really a need to link the IPC in each source? To me that appears to be WP:OLINK.
 * MOS:REPEATLINK seems to allow it in footnotes. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Source 8, BBC Online shouldn't be in italics as it isn't a published source
 * Fixed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Sources 10 and 14, Why are the surnames in all capital letters? I would say that would go against MOS:CAPS
 * Fixed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Sources 13 and 19, do you have any more information for describing that source? An ISBN or ISSN number? I would feel better if there were more in the reference (publisher, date, maybe a quote etc.)
 * See Ref 3, that's the media handbook I'm citing. For clarity, I've added the full citation every time. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

All in all, to me it just needs a little more work and it will be ready.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 08:50, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Responses inline, thanks for the review! Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Excellent, All passed now for GA. Well done .  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 11:55, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks! Courcelles (talk) 12:09, 27 April 2018 (UTC)