Talk:New realism (philosophy)

I don't understand the comment, "This article is written like a personal reflection or essay and may require cleanup. Please help improve it by rewriting it in an encyclopedic style. (December 2007)." I'm not finding that to be the case. Is the comment outdated? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.194.203.122 (talk) 01:23, 20 June 2010 (UTC)