Talk:Newark, New Jersey/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ankit Maity (talk · contribs) 16:22, 25 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) *Short sections and paragraphs are discouraged.
 * 2) *A word only needs to be wikilinked once within each section.
 * 3) *Avoid Peacock Terms, such as "beautiful", "famous", "popular", "well-known", "significant", "important" and "obvious".
 * 4) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) *More sources needed. It is needed wherever marked cn.
 * 2) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) *Images need succinct captions.
 * 2) *An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.
 * 3) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) *Images need succinct captions.
 * 2) *An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.
 * 3) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Everything should be good to go now...
 * Captions have been tightened, with unnecessary full-stops removed. Redundant wikileaks have been removed. Peacock terms have been removed and rewritten. :Short subsections have been reorganized or merged together. Citations have been provided for all tags.
 * If there is anything else necessary to make this a good article, please let me know.--Chimino (talk) 04:40, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Blank sections should be eliminated. See, "Elected officials, past and present" and "Notable residents".-- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 11:35, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅--Chimino (talk) 14:07, 11 July 2012 (UTC)