Talk:Newton House, Llandeilo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:28, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

I'll have this to you soon JAG  UAR   15:28, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * "The current house was built by Edward Rice in the Jacobean style in 1660" - link Jacobean architecture here?
 * "noted in particular for its purported ghost of Walter the Butler, a former employee whose tobacco smoke wafts through the air" - allegedly?
 * "and it was completed the following year.[5]Turrets" - space needed
 * Perhaps the caption of the image in the Architecture section could be something slightly different, like Newton House viewed from the south etc?
 * "heads in the corners". [13]" - extra space not needed (these comments are amazing, aren't they?)
 * " A billiard room was added to the house in l896" - 1896?
 * "The mature trees attract woodpecker" - a plural is needed for woodpecker

On hold
This is a well written and well researched article. I'm sure once all of the minor issues are out of the way this would easily pass. JAG UAR   17:15, 11 December 2015 (UTC)

Cheers all addressed except woodpecker which is actually a quote. It's common to have them referred to like that I think, like beaver.♦ Dr. Blofeld  17:38, 11 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them so quickly, this one is good to go now. The woodpecker was my mistake, I knew it shouldn't be changed!  JAG  UAR   20:53, 11 December 2015 (UTC)