Talk:Newton MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:04, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it, on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 13:36, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I know the article is brief but the lead looks a little short to me still.
 * What's an "interchange station"?
 * "in the planning area" what's a planning area?
 * "Exit B of Newton MRT station." no full stop required.
 * I would lose one of the images, they're not exactly unique to this station - right now the references are crushed up on my screen because of the image under the infobox.
 * "US$20.16 " one decimal place for conversions.
 * "Bus, Taxi" taxi
 * "Depth	12 metres (39 ft) (North South line platforms)" what about the Downtown line?
 * "Yes (External)" external
 * Parking is not mentioned in the article.
 * "jet grouting" what's that?
 * "scan through bags" no need for "through"
 * "validate our preparedness " who is "our"?
 * "caused the fire. The fire was" repetitive.
 * Link Singapore Civil Defence Force
 * "7 & 8" and.
 * How frequently do trains come through?
 * "and this station" just "and Newton" would be fine.
 * "gives the station a distinct character" according to whom?
 * "station design was simple" surely "is"?
 * "stands out greatly" according to whom?
 * "curve lines" curved?
 * "creating an organic landscape" sounds like a tourist brochure.
 * Ref 31, italics for Straits Times.
 * Ref 25 and 36 need en-dashes, not hyphens.
 * Addressed most of the issues above. "Planning area" refers more to a constituent district in Singapore, but I find it irrelevant so I removed it. Also cited for parking, but I don't see how it can be in the body (too trivial to be in there). Also worked on the station design.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:52, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, I made a few little tweaks, but passing now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:08, 13 March 2021 (UTC)