Talk:Niš Declaration/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:54, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it for me. This is a really neat piece of work. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:39, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "December 1914, during the Battle of Kolubara as a " comma after Kolubara.
 * Is List of former capitals of Serbia a useful link for "temporary capital"?
 * See below (T)
 * "Since the outbreak" Following makes more sense to my ear than Since.
 * "Yugoslav state" can we link, or at least Yugoslavia or a variant of Yugo?
 * Linked to "establishment of a Yugoslav state" to Creation of Yugoslavia (T)
 * "the United States entered the war" you don't need to link United States on its own, just pipe the whole thing to their entry into the war article.
 * Ref 14 should be pp.
 * "1918-1992." en-dash in year range of the title.

Thank you for taking time to review this nomination. I have addressed your comments above as suggested - except the link to the List of former capitals of Serbia. Wouldn't such a link be against WP:EGG though? If you think that's not a problem, I'll be happy to add the link. Otherwise, I don't see any direct loss to understanding of the topic from omission of the link.--Tomobe03 (talk) 21:08, 6 September 2021 (UTC) , do you think the above link should be added anyway (to the list of capitals)?--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:13, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I don't think the absence of the link is a "loss" but I think it might be useful for people to know about other capitals of Serbia... The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:15, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Added now to the lede and the prose body.--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:20, 7 September 2021 (UTC)