Talk:Nick Holden/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Why not. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Ref 1 needs capitalization and publisher.✅
 * St. Albert should be linked in the lead. ✅
 * "plumper" Plumber? ✅
 * Don't think you need to write Canada, the country is implied with the province and city. ✅
 * You should add  for those refs that use it.✅
 * Same for NewspaperArchive refs.✅


 * Ref 3 has authors. ✅
 * I assume there is a typo from Ref 3 regard his high school's name. ✅
 * You can specify that he was a hockey referee. ✅
 * Link minor ice hockey for bantam. ✅
 * "without trying out for the team" Trying out for a team. ✅
 * Here's a desktop site for ref 5. ✅
 * SJHL should be written out. ✅
 * "if hockey did not pan out" Maybe expand to "if his hockey career did not pan out"? ✅

Continuing tomorrow. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  07:49, 19 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "6 foot 3 and weighing 200 pounds" convert needed.✅
 * "2007 National Hockey League (NHL)" Don't need to write out NHL here. ✅
 * for ref 10.
 * "Although" WP:EDITORIAL.✅
 * Ref 18 has an author.✅
 * "He earned his first NHL call up during the 2010–11 season" Don't see this in source. ✅
 * Ref 20 has an author. ✅
 * Ref 24 doesn't load any text.✅
 * Ref 27 has an author.✅
 * Ref 29 too, and the title does not match the one on the site.✅
 * "He also led all Avalanche defenceman with three goals and four points in their Western Conference Quarter-final series defeat in the 2014 Stanley Cup playoffs against the Minnesota Wild." Also not in source (the point/assist). ✅


 * "teammatess"✅
 * "Holdan" and "Holdon"✅
 * "preventing him from becoming an unrestricted free agent at the end of the 2019–20 season." Not in source.✅
 * The section just for charity work seems unnecessary.✅
 * The lead can always be longer, doesn't seem to have much of his professional career.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  23:00, 19 May 2020 (UTC)