Talk:Nico Rosberg/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 11:30, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I will use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures

 * It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
 * It contains copyright infringements -
 * It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include,, or large numbers of , , or similar tags. (See also ). -
 * It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -

Lede

 * Is it worth mentioning why Team Rosberg is a thing?
 * 2016 championship is duplink

General

 * 2015 Abu Dhabi Grand Prix, Lewis Hamilton, Abu Dhabi, Bahrain Grand Prix and some other duplinks
 * no copyvio found
 * He graduated with an average grade of 1.2 in 2002. - might need a little context...
 * Rosberg raced for TeamMBM.com (Mercedes-Benz McLaren) for the 2000 season. - weird seaofblue here. Why is there a team name and also constructors?
 * Rosberg was paid £500,000 by Williams[42] and was the first son of a former world champion to race in Formula One since Damon Hill in the 1999 championship.[59] - not a fan of the mid sentence refs
 * points is linked too, late, should be at: "At the season-opening Bahrain Grand Prix, Rosberg scored his first career points with a seventh-place finish."
 * Could we move the first image in 2013–2016 to the right? The see also template looks a bit weird to me.
 * Could we add another subsection to 2013–2016? Perhaps 2013-15 and 2016, as that's the most important for this article.
 * To win the Drivers' Championship, Rosberg needed finish in the first three places regardless of whether Hamilton was first or second. - probably needs a better wording

GA Review

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * Automated note - If you fancy returning the favour, I have outstanding GA nominations that require reviewing at WP:GAN. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these, however it's definitely not mandatory. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)
 * I'm going to pass this one, there's a few comments above; but nothing to stop a progression. Well done. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:50, 3 May 2020 (UTC)