Talk:Nicole Collins

Suggestion
I edit more and more infrequently these days so I don't have too much time for extensive cleaning up. However, some well-meaning experienced editor will come along eventually to copy-edit this article. Right now it reads very much like a cv. You will need to cut down on the list of exhibitions -- keep it to some big, high-profile shows and if a reader wants to see Collins' full exhibition list they can go to her website. Remember, Wikipedia's not a directory. It's best to get the list you want rather than someone coming along and removing the whole thing. It's also preferable to write in prose, rather than lists. Something like, Collins has exhibited at X, Y and Z and had solo exhibitions at XX, YY and ZZ. In the end, it actually gives more weight to the big shows and shows the reader what she's accomplished -- no one reads endless lists.  freshacconci  talk to me  16:34, 10 March 2015 (UTC)