Talk:Nicole Kidman/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good, but for the lead, see WP:LEADCITE.


 * Be consistent in this article on the capitalization of "Goodwill ambassador".
 * ✅ I believe I've fixed all instances of "Goodwill Ambassador" capitalization already, but if I did miss any, please do point them out. Film Enthusiast (talk) 06:16, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

Early life

 * "in halls" "in the halls"

Career

 * Several paragraph-ending sentences lack sources.


 * "which threatens" "that threatens"


 * Shouldn't it be "with a US$16–17 million per-film price tag"?


 * "December, 11 2020" "11 December 2020" (consistency)

Acting style and legacy

 * This section could use an expansion.
 * ✅ I believe I've expanded this section enough already. Though I'll gladly continue to add to it if I find any more information. Film Enthusiast (talk) 07:36, 7 May 2021 (UTC)

Personal life

 * Remove the comma after "Lenny Kravitz in 2003".


 * Some sentences here also lack sources.
 * Could it be possible for you to specify which ones please? I can't seem to find any sentences missing sources from my end. I feel like it's all pretty much covered. But it might just be my eyes. Film Enthusiast (talk) 06:16, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I think you got it. Forgot where exactly since my first review but I see now that it's all sourced. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:37, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I think you got it. Forgot where exactly since my first review but I see now that it's all sourced. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:37, 11 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "In the beginning" "At the beginning"

Acting credits and awards

 * This section looks good.

Discography

 * "Gold by Australian" "Gold by the Australian"


 * "Netherlands" "the Netherlands"


 * Made WP:CITEBUNDLES for sentences with four or more sources.
 * ✅ I also merged citations from other sections as well. Film Enthusiast (talk) 00:21, 8 May 2021 (UTC)