Talk:Nicole Paige Brooks/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Averageuntitleduser (talk · contribs) 01:08, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Another drag queen article? Don't mind if I do! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 01:08, 21 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Great, thanks! Looking forward to collaborating again. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 01:59, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Well-written
The prose feels especially clean this time! After a copyedit, here's what I'm left with:
 * She was the second to be eliminated, — with the sentence prior, this could be construed as her being the second eliminated from the whole show
 * added "on the season". --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:55, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * required teams to compete to earn the most cash performing burlesque and selling gift certificates — after revisiting this, I feel like a rearrangement: "required teams to perform burlesque and sell gift certificates, while competing to earn the most cash" is a bit clearer.
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:55, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * She was referenced during the "reading" challenges — someone unfamiliar might not realize that this is essentially a roast battle.
 * Added "(or comedy roast)" --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:55, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Perhaps link "herstory"?
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:55, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Verifiable with no original research
There are some questionable sources, like ScreenRant, Pride.com, and The Georgia Voice, but I believe their uses are defendable (i.e. uncontroversial claims, attributed opinion, reliable author, locally dedicated paper). Earwig shows a solid score of 31%. The Pride.com quote is hefty, but I like it: it's attributed and gives some nice context/personality. However:
 * For the statement of opinion, please defend Thotyssey use. They don't seem like a prominent publication.
 * I have removed Thotyssey. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:44, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * I would replace the Decider.com source with this Hollywood Reporter one (because why not)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:52, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:52, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Spot-check

 * They spell "Bryan" with an "i", her website confirms this spelling. Looks good otherwise.
 * Fixed. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 12:57, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Looks good now Averageuntitleduser (talk) 14:33, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Inference, looks good
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 * Reasonable inference, looks good
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Broad in its coverage
I think you could knock down two birds with one stone by using her website to source the day/month and location of birth in the infobox. The best source I could find for her birthday was this unfortunate tweet. But, of course, all power to you if you don't think it's too important or would prefer secondary sources.

Once again, I am impressed by your work in cobbling this together! A cursory search for sources has shown me nothing substantial. Specifically, I tried to find any scraps about her childhood and came away emptyhanded.
 * I would prefer to use secondary coverage for birth date and/or birth location. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:57, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Understandable. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 14:33, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Neutral
All descriptions and quotes are attributed, looks good on this front.
 * --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:42, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Stable
No recent content disputes or edit wars, the place of birth was sorted out on the talk page.
 * --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:43, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Illustrated
The two images from Flickr are correctly labeled as Creative Commons. Both of them give the reader a better understanding.
 * --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:43, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Summary
A few fixes and I believe this is ready! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 03:27, 22 March 2024 (UTC)


 * @Averageuntitleduser Thanks for reviewing! Please let me know if any concerns remain. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:58, 22 March 2024 (UTC)


 * And thanks for the quick response! I am happy to pass this article. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 14:33, 22 March 2024 (UTC)