Talk:Niebla Roja/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:38, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 12:38, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Professional wresting career

 * "Sergio Chávez and his younger Miguel," - replace the text in bold to younger brother
 * "better known under the ring name Ángel de Oro" - a comma is needed after this piece of text
 * "The feud led both Chávez to work for International Wrestling Revolution Group (IWRG) on opposite sides, but Sergio broke his arm in early 2008 and did not compete for eight months." - are we also refering to his brother? If so, he needs to be mentioned in this sentence.

Ángel de Plata (2008–2012)

 * "In Durango he feuded with his younger brother, in a feud that was so well received by the crowd that both his brother and he received an invitation" - replace the text in bold to the sibilings
 * "to complement his brothers" - brother's
 * "The duo made their CMLL debut on July 4, 2008 wrestling as a team dubbed Los Angeles Celestiales ("The Celestial Angels")" - a full stop needs to be inserted to end this sentence
 * "In late 2009 Los Ángeles Celestiales participated in a tournament to crown new Mexican National Trios Champion." - to crown a new
 * "The team lost in the first round to Los Cancerberos del Infierno (Virus, Pólvora and Euforia" - the closing bracket is missing at the end of this section of text
 * "On the January 15, 2010 Super Viernes Ángel de Plata" - change the text in bold to January 15, 2010 per MOS:DATEFORMAT

Niebla Roja (2012–present)

 * "Niebla Roja competed in CMLL's first ever" - inaugural is more formal in this instance
 * "but did not qualify for the semi-final part of the tournament." - remove part of the touranment since it is already established it was a tournament beforehand
 * "Niebla Roja was forced to team up with Dragón Rojo, Jr. from the rival Los Revolucionarios del Terror "rival" group" - reptition of rival

Hermanos Chávez (2017–present)

 * "In the spring of 2017 CMLL" - Spring of 2017 is not appropriate. It should be In March 2017,
 * "with his fellow Los Guerreros Laguneros team mates" - teammates is one word
 * "and state his legal name;" - a colon is more appropriate here
 * "successfully defended the lght heavyweight championship" - typo; light
 * "In the fall of 2018 Niebla Roja" - In late 2018, Niebla Roja per MOS:SEASON
 * "facing each other repeatedly as Rey Bucanero often cheated to get the upper hand in their rivalry." - gain supremacy