Talk:Niels Bohr/GA1

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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 08:39, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

HI! I'll take this review, thanks!  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  08:39, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

I've outlined what needs to be done to make this GA quality below, thanks!  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  11:21, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

" Bohr persuaded King Gustav V of Sweden" Is there a reason the word King isn't hyperlinked with the rest of his name?
 * Mainly because that is the name of the Wikipedia article. But, on reflection, it isn't normal to link in the title.

"The rise of Nazism in Germany prompted many scholars to flee their countries" This sentence doesn't really make sense. As a result of Nazism, people fled from their countries? Could you make it clearer, do you mean they fled from Germany?  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  09:56, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Some fled from other countries. Fermi fled Italy; Teller fled Hungary; Placzek fled Czechoslovakia; Ulam fled Poland (good move that). Hawkeye7 (talk) 12:05, 1 March 2013 (UTC)

" Heisenberg, it seems" Could you remove the "it seems". Bit of a redundant two words I think ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  09:57, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 12:05, 1 March 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'm fairly sure the article is all good, i'll pass the article tommorow just incase I find anything else, thanks for the nom hawkeye  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  12:14, 1 March 2013 (UTC)