Talk:Nienkämper

Hi Wikipedia,

I'm hoping someone can give me a few pointers with this page.

I'm new to Wikipedia and have been focused on improving articles about Canadian architecture and design. I'm hoping to make the case that the furniture company, Nienkämper, is worthy of an encyclopedia entry for its role in Canadian design history. Full disclosure: I worked at a Toronto design magazine that published a profile on the company and its founder, which is where I got the idea to write this article. Any advice would be much appreciated as my last draft was A) too promotional sounding (yikes!) and B) didn't have proper citations (as in I inputed them incorrectly in Wiki's backend).

With thanks, Yamtime