Talk:Nightfreak and the Sons of Becker/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wetrorave (talk · contribs) 15:09, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Following my reviews of 1977 (Ash album) and Avalanche United, it's likely fine for me to review this. Wetrorave (talk) 15:09, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good, image has a proper rationale
 * "the Coral released" > "the Coral, released"
 * "writing Nightfreak and the Sons of Becker" > "writing the record"
 * "for the Lightning Seeds. The Coral" > "for the Lightning Seeds; the Coral"

Background and recording

 * "were subsequently certified" > "were certified" because 'subsequently' is redundant
 * "A few weeks after" > "A month after" because the source says it was a month

Composition and lyrics

 * "album,[10][9] with" - put the refs in order
 * "and an organ heard" - remove the organ wikilink

Release

 * Looks good

Reception

 * Ref 26 is a page for reviews of Magic & Medicine, not of Nightfreak; here is the right link
 * "process. wrote" > "process. He wrote"
 * "or 'Pass It On'"," - replace the area in bold with Template:'"
 * "The staff at Tiny Mix Tapes"> "A guest writer of Tiny Mix Tapes"

Track listing

 * Good

Personnel

 * Move the sentence to the beginning of the section

Charts

 * Looks good

Overall
as of 7 July 2021:

You may oppose to any of the suggestions given here if you give a proper explanation. Wetrorave (talk) 15:09, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Made the changes. Yeepsi (talk) 15:31, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Alright, I'll ✅ this one as well. Wetrorave (talk) 20:53, 7 July 2021 (UTC)