Talk:Niko Hansen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:23, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Going to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 20:23, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lede

 * "He also appeared during the collegiate offseason with Seattle Sounders FC U-23." - He also appeared with Seattle Sounders FC U-23 during the collegiate offseason.
 * ✅, changed to recommendation.

College and amateur

 * "Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut, bagging a goal" - earning
 * ✅, changed to "tallying a goal".


 * "Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut" - put the acroynms of Conference USA in parentheses after its inital mention


 * Wikilink the first mention of assist to Assist (football) for non-Soccer readers
 * ✅, linked in the sentence that reads "...and tallied an assist in his NCAA Tournament debut against George Mason."


 * "he was named Third Team All-CUSA." - named to the
 * ✅, changed to "he was named to the All-CUSA Third Team."


 * "but was named Second Team All-CUSA with final stats of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances." -, with a total of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances.


 * "Hansen tallied a career-high 13 goals on the year" - during


 * "and a First Team All-CUSA nod." - change this to and was featured in the First Team ALL-CUSA.
 * ✅, changed to "...and was named to the All-CUSA First Team."


 * "He finished his collegiate career with 28 goals in 79 appearances." - this sentence needs to be cited to a reliable source.
 * ✅, added reference to his New Mexico profile.

Seattle Sounders FC U-23

 * "Hansen turned out for Seattle Sounders FC U-23 in the Premier Development League." - played
 * ✅, changed to recommendation.

Columbus Crew SC

 * "Hansen missed multiple matches during the summer" - How many matches exactly?
 * ✅, changed to "Hansen missed 14 matches during the summer...}}


 * "then suffered a thigh strain" - and then
 * ✅, changed to recommendation.


 * "He found his form in autumn," - How about mid to late 2018 to comply with MOS:SEASON?
 * ✅, changed to "He found his form in the later part of the year..."


 * Delink the second mention of Justin Meram in this section
 * ✅, delinked the mention in the first sentence of the second paragraph.