Talk:Nimco Ali/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 15:17, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review asap. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 15:17, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Image caption in the infobox can be shortened to just "Ali in 2019".
 * My other recommendation for the infobox would be to change the Occupation from "Social activist, author." to Social activist · author.
 * Uncapitalize the "The" in the "...and The book contained 42 stories...".
 * The lede should be re-written to:


 * → She is the co-founder and CEO of The Five Foundation, a global partnership to end female genital mutilation (FGM).
 * Ali underwent female genital mutilation in Djibouti, and later went on to form the Daughters of Eve organization with Leyla Hussein to campaign against FGM. She released her first book in 2019 that contains 42 stories from 152 interviews that Ali collected from women across 14 countries. Later that year she co-founded The Five Foundation with Brendan Wynne, and in 2020 she co-founded the Ginsburg Women's Health Board with Mika Simmons.


 * She contested a seat in the 2017 general election under the Women's Equality Party. In 2019, she supported Boris Johnson, endorsed the Conservative Party and campaigned for Conservative candidates. She was appointed as Independent Government Adviser for Tackling Violence Against Women and Girls in 2020.


 * In the "Isobel Shirlaw said in i that it was an important book and that "The chorus of women's voices which provide a multi-dimensional, global view of these hidden issues is powerful."" sentence, the last quotation mark should be moved on the left side of the comma.

Amended as per the above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:47, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Images

 * Looks good. It is optional but another image with Matt Hancock can be added from here, to the "Political activity" section.
 * Nice find, but I wasn't able to capture what I felt was a suitable still, so I didn't do this. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:48, 4 January 2022 (UTC)