Talk:Nine-ball/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 19:39, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  19:39, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Ref 2 needs an author.
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:58, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 3 should be replaced with this, which isn't a SPS.
 * Not quite sure what the ref has to do with the sentence it was citing though.


 * Removed as doesn't cite the info. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:58, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

Saving for now. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  03:42, 14 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Several references are missing.
 * Added where suitable Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:22, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "but that their opponent would struggle with.[16][8]" Reorder refs.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 08:09, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "If a player misses potting a ball on a shot," You mean pocketing a ball?
 * These things are one and the same... But potting a ball is slightly more stringent in that you have to pocket the ball without fouling. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:29, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * A bit of WP:REPCITE in the first paragraph of Breaking and the Six-ball section.
 * No page numbers from Ref 4?


 * There is? :24, 89–90 Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 08:09, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

That should be it. I assume some of the references were the best one you could've found online, since some are borderline SPS. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  02:25, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I've covered all of the above. Thank you for taking a look for me. :) Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:22, 16 May 2020 (UTC)