Talk:Niobe Xandó

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Hi! So I think they way I'm gonna do this is copy and paste sentences and give a small cite where they are to help!

"Within this time she began her career as a plastic artist in 1947 and met more painters such as Yoshiya Takaoka and Geraldo de Barros while attending a workshop by Raphael Galvez." Biography -If you could try to link wikis for these artists listed for quick reference would be extra great and helpful.

The film that you keep linking is a great reference but I would try to describe it in the references quickly as a full film just so people don't expect an article, also for specific info maybe link an article rather than the full film for people who'd rather read the link. But it is a good link because it's free and playable for flash! Especially for the artworks, if she has a website with a playlist of her works it would be good to link those there instead of the film.

For the artworks section maybe possibly cite her inspiration for the works and what she meant it to be rather than a pure description, especially with having seldom links to the actual work itself.

I think the amount of Exhibitions is really great, and I can see why you wouldn't describe every one, but some description for the most famous or influential ones would probably be good. Also the actual layout of the dates looks a little messy, I would try to using subheaded font for the dates and the description in a regular font to make them pop out a little more(and possibly adding wiki links to those exhibits IF available of course). There also are some small grammatical and layout bugs but I'm sure you'll see those when you go over this one more time!

As for the Collections and Biography I would say just presenting it better with titles and diverse text would make it look less dense and more readable and thus more navigable.

References are well laid out but again I would try to describe what they are just a smidge; links in Spanish only should say so, film should be labeled, etc.

Overall it's incredibly informative, not biased, with good links and every fact is sourced academically. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Athenaxs (talk • contribs) 00:27, 14 May 2019 (UTC)