Talk:Nirma Zárate

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 27 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Shanny2398.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 01:39, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

tbh I don't know if I am doing this peer review right
I don't think I'm peer reviewing this correctly but hopefully message gets to you! :)

Suggestions: - Separate of education; you have a lot of info on her education so maybe include some kind of separate chunk for that instead of grouped together in the first paragraph - the first few sentences basically introducing her - maybe isolate it a little more? Make it clear who she is through this method - Separation of mentioning her works/exhibitions she has been in - few more mentions on a few more pieces? I've been describing them due to not being sure of the whole copyright images. I've just been describing key aspects and consistent themes within artists work, all while mentioning a few of their names

Comments: - i like the Taller 4 Rojo section; important thing to mention of her career :) Shanny2398 (talk) 17:30, 11 February 2019 (UTC)