Talk:Nirmala (novel)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: AmritasyaPutra (talk · contribs) 02:30, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

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Discussion
I have started the review. It does not have any cleanup banners and does not contain any seemingly copyright infringements, I will continue with the six good article criteria. Thank you. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 02:34, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

Here are few suggestions:
 * The book has been published and re-published several times. I remember reading it in a different cover. Can the caption "Nirmala novel cover" can be made more generic to indicate it is not the only cover? And I think the cover artist (a generic one here) is not needed, its my personal thought. What do you think about it? --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 11:12, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, I doubt about the source. It may follow either Rubin's or Alok's translation. So, I am confused. The source just say its from Premchand. If so, lets follow either one version (translation) in the lead and remove the image (but hate it) as it is not mandatory for GA noms. --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969"><span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969">The Herald : <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969">here I am  14:51, 8 December 2014 (UTC)


 * The content in the lead should be a summary of the body and most of the references should be in the body directly (thus not needed to be repeated in the lead) unless there is an exceptional statement in the lead. Do you think there can be minor changes in the lead in the light of this suggestions? --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 11:12, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Sure..<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969"><span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969">The Herald : <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969">here I am  13:53, 8 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Godaan, in the lead, needs at least half a phrase of introduction to make it more appropriate. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 11:12, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
 * ✅..How now?? --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969"><span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969">The Herald : <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0em 0em 0.8em,#FF4500 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#90EE90 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#696969">here I am  12:53, 10 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Fair. I will continue the review. :-) --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 13:02, 10 December 2014 (UTC)


 * The goodreads reference is redundand and can be replaced with a better one. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 10:41, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The prose of plot section can be improved. Complex, lengthy sentences can be made smaller, simpler. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 10:41, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The article needs to be expanded to feel complete/ready for GA quality. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 10:41, 23 December 2014 (UTC)