Talk:Nisbets

Rewrite
I've started a rewrite of the page to bring this in line with the guidelines. I have rewritten the 'History' section completely, which was previously not in line with standards and used bullet-point form, which is not standard. I have also added references throughout, but may return and add more information and detail, etc, when I have time. Happy to chat / discuss on all fronts, as ever. Let me know. ScepticalChymist (talk) 17:39, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

Update: I've gone in today, and rewritten the bottom section of the page. I have added additional references and removed the advertorial language, which appears to have been taken directly from the company's website. I think this is everything for now from me. I'll leave the issues flag on the article for a week or so to encourage some discussion. Sure it can be tightened up in places. Happy to chat / discuss on all fronts, as ever. Let me know. ScepticalChymist (talk) 12:54, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Update: Following the last update, I have now removed the Issues flag. Happy to chat / discuss on all fronts, as ever. Let me know. ScepticalChymist (talk) 12:45, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Advertisement
Reads like an advertisement for the company from start to finish. In fact, the main contributors LinkedIn page states that his job, while working for this company, was to write this Wikipedia article. 109.76.40.86 (talk) 21:10, 5 April 2015 (UTC)