Talk:Noʻu Revilla

Self-promotional article?
The wording and format of this biography article seems to indicate that it was written by the individual herself, like a CV. A huge chunk of the article is simply a list of her works. There is little about the personal life, and some text like, "Growing up, she was surrounded by strong and resourceful wāhine, fisherfolx, hula dancers, singers, and storytellers," are taken directly from the source written in first-person by the subject. There is also a lack of other Wikipedia conventions like hyperlinking and tone. OrangeLTE(talk) 05:53, 29 October 2023 (UTC)


 * I'm actually guessing it's a class assignment, whether officially or in a DIY sense. My read was there was enough to clear AfC but if others feel otherwise, AfD remains an option. Star   Mississippi  13:20, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
 * the poetry, activism, and scholarly work sections could be edited to show more of the significance of her body of work rather than to just be a list of accomlishments Wikiwarr (talk) 11:14, 5 November 2023 (UTC)