Talk:No. 27 Squadron RAF Regiment

Review-Redmarkviolinist
Well, it's been quite a while since I've been on, but I was asked to a review. So here it is, hopefully it will get me back into editing.


 * You could probably combine the Formation and History paragraphs-they are really quite similar and ambiguous.


 * In August 1977 the Queen approved the awarding of a Standard to the squadron in recognition of 25 years service. The Queen's name could be clarified. I am from America and have no clue about British Hierarchy, so if someone from a different country was looking at this, they would be able to understand this.


 * References look good, correct format. You could use some book sources also, but I have no clue how far you are planning on taking this article. If you are looking for GA, then this would be recommended.


 * Jt NBC Regt changed to the Joint CBRN Regiment. CBRN stands for Chemical, Biological, Radiological and Nuclear. Look at combining these sentences, just doesn't sound correct.


 * Be consistent with linking your dates and formatting them. They are all different styles.


 * In general, the whole page should just be expanded.


 * You could definitely use images. Ṝ ed  M arkV iolinist Drop me a line 17:17, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

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