Talk:No (Shakira song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:17, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * A pop ballad, the song explores → replace "the song" with "it" to avoid repetation
 * is best for the two of them → is best for both
 * a "tender" ballad and a "classic heartbreak song" → as you paraphrase here, you need the reference these claims here as well
 * It also fared well → I would change "well" with "moderately", as no real big success was registered with this song

Infobox

 * Image needs ALT
 * Is the release date 2 July or 5 June?? Please create a "Release history" section where you add the correct release date with a source
 * Genre should be only "Pop", as others are not sourced in the article's body

Background

 * her first English-language album → no "-" here
 * having co-written almost sixty songs → numbers above ten should not be written out
 * first a Spanish-language album → a Spanish language album first
 * has always been by idol → I think you want to say "my idol" here?

Composition and recording

 * is best for the two of them → is best for both

Critical reception

 * was a "seething, acoustic-guitar-based" in → was a "seething, acoustic-guitar-based" recording in
 * "It's not hard to imagine → "it's not hard to imagine

Chart performance

 * This section should be "Commercial performance"
 * No flaws here ;)

Music video

 * The accompanying music video → An accompanying music video (don't start abruptly)
 * with Shakira in many of her music videos → with Shakira for various other projects
 * whilst it was edited by → and edited by
 * falls off the track and into water beneath → no "and" here
 * Throughout the video → replace "video" with "clip" to avoid repeating yourself
 * seemingly as a metaphor for finding the strength to fly on her own → Remove this. I don't see any critic saying this, and thus it is your own opinion.
 * does not go through with it and walks away → fails and walks away

Live performances

 * I will take another look on this section after you fix the heavy repetation of "performed"; use another expressions like "sang, made an appearance..."

Track listing and formats

 * No need for "formats" in the title
 * Is there a digital download out there? If no, then remove it from the infobox

Credits and personnel

 * from the album's booklet: → from the liner notes of Fijación Oral, Vol. 1

Charts

 * Flawless ;)

Release history

 * Don't forget to create one!

Copy-violation

 * 32.9% is still ok!

Media

 * Image seems stable

Outcome

 * Little issues here and there, but overall, the article is in a good shape. for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:22, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Alex talk 23:23, 28 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Passing this! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:07, 29 December 2017 (UTC)