Talk:No Can Do/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:04, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Infobox

 * If Soul is an influence and not stated by a critic, then only Pop should be there.
 * Done; added a source in the body. Till

Lead

 * "No Can Do" received generally mixed reviews → "No Can Do" garnered mixed reviews
 * Done. Till
 * from music critics, as some felt that the song was dull, but most agreed that it was an improvement from their previous single "Girls". → from music critics; some felt that the song was dull, but others agreed that it was better than their previous single, "Girls"
 * Done. Till
 * it also appeared on the chart in Slovakia. → it also charted on the singles chart in Slovakia at number 53.
 * Done. Till
 * Link music video
 * Done. Till
 * Mention only live performance?
 * But it's sooo minor. Till
 * Doesn't matter, it was still performed live. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:52, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Added. Till

Background

 * (2007), and the completion of the album's → (2007) and finishing its supporting tour,
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 * Despite their announcement, they soon began work on the album. → Source?
 * Done; added source. Till
 * I'd change the title of this section to "Background and release"
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 * Perhaps say what the extended play consists of?
 * Done. Till

Composition

 * For the audio sample, is 38 seconds 10% of 3:10?
 * No it's 20% but in my defense I didn't upload it (don't know how to). Till
 * You can remove it and ask someone to upload one that is 10%. It won't affect it's GA status if you do it after I've passed it. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:54, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * How can you use the album notes for genres?
 * Lol woops, fixed. Till
 * Pop and Soul are still referenced to the album notes. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:54, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * There is no mention of Pop here, only soul. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * Done. Till
 * The single release has a length of 3:10 (three minutes and ten seconds). → This implies that the album version is different in some way?
 * Fixed. Till
 * According to the digital sheet music published at Sheet Music Direct by Sony-ATV Music Publishing and EMI Music Publishing, → Not needed.
 * Removed. Till
 * "No Can Do" samples the song "Yes It's You", performed by Tennessee artist Sweet Charles Sherrell. → Sherrel was a bassist, not a singer, and helped produce songs for James Brown, so how does it sample something of his?
 * But that's what the source says. Till
 * Hmm okay. I just didn't quite understand how it could be done lol. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:54, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * As you have included info about Keisha explaining the lyrics, I'd change the title of the this section "Composition and lyrics"
 * Done. Till

Critical reception

 * The reviewer from Orange → A reviewer for Orange
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 * There a re lots of quotes, can you paraphrase some into your own words?
 * ? Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:55, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. Till

Commercial performance

 * Why don't you use the Official Charts Company website archive for the peak instead of Musicweek? You can't get much more reliable than the Official Charts Company website.
 * Why? They state the same thing. Plus Music week is just as reliable. Till
 * I guess it's just because that is who is the official publisher and who I use. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:56, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * brought their total single sales to three million. → Is this over their entire career?
 * Yeah but as of now it's like 4 million. Till
 * "No Can Do" failed to chart on the Irish Singles Chart, becoming the group's first single since "Soul Sound" to not chart in that country. → No source, so remove.
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 * Why not mention the European chart?
 * Done. Till

Music video

 * Link music video
 * Done. Till
 * Puig has previously created → Puig had previously directed
 * Done. Till
 * Perhaps add a screen shot?
 * Idk how to do that. Till
 * Ask someone to add one, or post a new thread on WP:Songs? Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:57, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Live performances

 * No issues.

Track listings

 * I'd change this to "Formats and track listings"
 * Done. Till

Credits and personnel

 * Vanessa Brown died in 1999, how is she credited?
 * Wrong Vanessa Brown LOL. Fixed. Till

Charts

 * No issues.

Release history

 * No issues.