Talk:No Exit (Miami Vice)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * Add "running time" to the infobox
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC) per MOS:ACRO
 * For the second paragraph, how about add: "The show centers on ..." followed by "In this episode, ..."
 * Done both. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Plot
 * FBI should be Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) per MOS:ACRO
 * Removed the pipe, left as full name. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Add actor for "Tony Amato"
 * Add actor for "Rita Amato"
 * These were both already present. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Production
 * Paragraphs shouldn't have images on the left for the very first. Move image to right size per MOS:IMAGELOCATION
 * Moved to right. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC) per MOS:ACRO
 * Done above. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Reception
 * Why is "first broadcast" being used in one, and "premiered" in the lead? Choose only one please.
 * Two terms meaning the same thing are used to keep the prose varied and not sounding repetitive, it'd be worse to change to repetitive phrases. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Unlink NBC; it has already been linked once
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Don't think every repeat/airing needs to be listed. Only the original airing for countries
 * Left it in, it's not really undue given how little broadcast information can be found and sourced. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Miami Vice
 * Linked on first post-lead mention. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * References
 * Ref. 1 is missing publisher (The Onion)
 * Ref. 10 has WP:DASH issues
 * Allrovi is missing publisher (Rovi)
 * Ref. 13 is missing publisher (Internet Brands)
 * Fixed all; though Rovi is a Welsh magician. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * External links
 * Add "television" portal to the side
 * Add TV.com episode link
 * Categories should be in alphabetical order
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)

Great work. On hold for now. TBrandley 20:52, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, everything's either been addressed or corrected. GRAPPLE   X  22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I'll pass the article. Congrats! TBrandley 23:41, 8 August 2012 (UTC)