Talk:No Lie (Sean Paul song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:30, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing one of your articles for the first time in a while, this should be good! --K. Peake 16:30, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Wikilink Emily Warren in the infobox
 * "featuring English singer" → "that features English singer"
 * "the former's first extended play," → "the former's debut EP,"
 * I'm going to put "first EP" because Sean Paul released 6 albums before this EP and "debut" usually means an artist's first music work or body of work. LOVI  33  21:31, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

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 * "Pip Kembo, with production from the latter two." → "Pip Kembo. Production and co-production were handled by Sermstyle and Kembo, respectively."
 * "is also included on" → "was later included on"
 * "reggae, tropical pop track," → "reggae, and tropical pop track,"
 * "with lyrics about Paul expressing" → "with the lyrics seeing Paul express"
 * "the top 10 in 10 charts" → "the top 10 of the charts in 10 countries"
 * "including the UK Singles Chart where it became" → "including the UK Singles Chart, becoming"
 * "first UK Top 10 single." → "first top 10 single in the United Kingdom."
 * "It is currently certified gold" → "The song has since been certified gold"
 * "the United Kingdom, where is has a platinum certification." → "the UK, having received a platinum certification in the country."
 * "The song received a music video in 2017" → "An accompanying music video was released in January 2017"
 * "promoted the single with" → "promoted the song with"
 * "including ones at" → "including performing it at"
 * "and Delirous & Alex K have been" → "and Delirous & Alex K, respectively, have been"

Background and composition
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 * "that makes use of keyboards" → "track that makes use of a keyboard" on the audio sample text
 * "Emily Warren and its producer and co-producer, Sermstyle and Pip Kembo." → "Emily Warren, its producer Sermstyle, and co-producer Pip Kembo." with the wikilink
 * "in which he" → "after which he"
 * "wrote onto it," → "wrote onto the rhythm"
 * "he went searching" → "Paul went searching"
 * Target hook to Hook (music)
 * "her voice and went onto finish" → "Lipa's voice and went on to finish"
 * "The engineering was handled by" → "Engineering was handled by"
 * "took on mixing duties," → "was responsible for mixing,"
 * ""No Lie" is an" → "Musically, "No Lie" is an"
 * "for three minutes and 41 seconds," → "for 3:41,"
 * Target chords to Chord (music)
 * "It starts a bit moody," → "The song starts somewhat moody,"
 * "comments of the physique" → "comments on the physique"
 * "and about his attraction" → "and his attraction"
 * "expressing to her" → "expressing to the woman" to avoid too many uses of "her"
 * "The song's title comes from" → "The title "No Lie" comes from"

Release and promotion

 * "along with a 15-second preview" → "alongside sharing a 15-second preview"
 * "through Island Records on" → "through Island Records as a single on" with the target
 * "It was serviced" → ""No Lie" was serviced"
 * "formats in the United States" → "stations in the United States"
 * "by Universal Music" → "by Universal Music Group"
 * Why is Germany release after the radio ones in prose when it came before them?
 * Placed before. LOVI  33  22:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)


 * "featuring Tory Lanez as its B-side." → "that features Tory Lanez as the B-side." with the target
 * "Paul's first extended play Mad Love the Prequel," → "Paul's debut EP Mad Love the Prequel,"
 * Again, I'm going to put "first EP" per above. LOVI  33  22:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)


 * "It is also included" → "It was later included"
 * Do you need to mention what label Lipa's album was released through because you didn't for Paul's album?
 * I thought that since the single was released through Island records that it kind of implied that so was the EP, but I'll remove it. LOVI  33  22:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

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 * "on the Baywatch (2017) soundtrack," → "on the soundtrack to the film Baywatch (2017),"
 * "in their third studio, as well as their garden." → "in the third studio, as well as the garden."
 * "viewed it as" → "viewed the video as" to specify it is not his outfit they were writing about
 * "at Capital FM's Jingle Bell Ball." → "at the Jingle Bell Ball for Capital FM."
 * "On 27 May of that year, the two" → "On 27 May, the two"
 * "at BBC Radio 1's Big Weekend of that year," → "at BBC Radio 1 Big Weekend for 2017," with the wikilink and target
 * "with her song" → "with her track"
 * "for a final time together" → "for the final time together"
 * "Capital FM's Summertime Ball 2017," → "the Summertime Ball for Capital FM 2017,"
 * "and Lipa's setlist at" → "as well as Lipa's setlist at"
 * "The song was included" → "The song was also included"
 * Identify the tour as The Self-Titled Tour
 * "where she occasionally performed" → "for which she occasionally performed"

Reception
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 * "named it a" → "named the song a"
 * Keep the HotNewHipHop review, though remove the "HOTTTTT" rating part because that is not a proper rating like stars and is clearly unencyclopedic
 * "the song a rating of 4.25, with many" → "the song a rating of 4.25/10, with many"
 * "ranked it as" → "ranked "No Lie" as"
 * "on the charted dated" → "on the UK Singles Chart dated" with the wikilink
 * "lasted a total of 30 weeks on the chart," → "lasted for 30 weeks on the chart,"
 * "first UK top ten single." → "first UK top 10 single."
 * "was awarded a platinum certification from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) for track-equivalent sales of 600,000 units." → "was certified platinum by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) for track-equivalent sales of 600,000 units in the UK."
 * "the top 10 of charts" → "the top 10 of the charts"
 * "It currently holds a platinum certification in" → "It was certified platinum in"
 * Add after the countries who certified it, like: "by the Syndicat National de l'Édition Phonographique (SNEP),..." continuing to mention the other certification organisations and add at the very end "respectively"
 * "reached number 11," → "reached number 11 on the FIMI Singles Chart," with the target
 * "reached number 45 in Colombia and 43 in Venezuela," → "reached number 43 and 45 in Venezuela and Columbia, respectively,"
 * "on the Hot Canadian Digital Songs," → "on the Hot Canadian Digital Songs chart,"

Track listing
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 * Retitle to Track listings

Song credits

 * Do you know the location of Alchemy Mastering, specifically?
 * It doesn't say in the liner notes, but according to its website, it is in London. Should I add that? LOVI  33  22:45, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
 * No, it is fine to not mention the location if the liner notes don't --K. Peake 08:02, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

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 * Target EMI April Music Inc. to EMI Records
 * Wikilink Sean Paul
 * Wikilink Dua Lipa
 * Wikilink Sermstyle
 * Wikilink Barry Grint

Video credits

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * Should the Czech Republic and Slovakia radio charts really be here?
 * Removed. LOVI  33  22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Nothing is found for the Mexico chart by clicking on the URL
 * Fixed. LOVI  33  22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Why is the video chart included for Poland as well as the Airplay one?
 * Removed. LOVI  33  22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)


 * The Romania peak is not displayed by the source
 * Added note on how to access the correct chart. LOVI  33  22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

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Year-end charts

 * Poland (ZPAV) → Poland (Polish Airplay Top 100)
 * UK Singles (Official Charts Company) → UK Singles (OCC)
 * The 2019 year-end chart position should have a separate table from the table for two years prior
 * Changed. LOVI  33  22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

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Certifications

 * Good

Release history
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 * Format → Format(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, though hopefully this review will continue your consistent response rate! --K. Peake 09:30, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Hey, thanks for another amazing review. I have done all your suggestions, let me know if you need me to do anything else. LOVI  33  23:10, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ after you followed through amazingly! --K. Peake 08:02, 18 November 2020 (UTC)