Talk:No Longer Human

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The summary of the "memorandums" don't really match the novel.

First memorandum: The main character is subjected to sexual abuse by one young female servant. The abuse itself is only vaguely described, but it seems to be constituted more or less by the introduction to sex itself. So, no violent sexual abuse by multiple servants. Third memorandum: Yoshiko is only destructive in one aspect - the fact that she falls for the main character. Moreover, she does not "betray" him but is raped.

Another weird thing is that Horiki is totally left out of the picture. These inaccuracies are now corrected.

After witnessing his wife being raped
When the hell did this happen? It can't be Yoshiko because Oba pointed out that she was afraid Oba might violate her even though he hasn't done a thing yet. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.224.94.151 (talk) 07:43, 28 September 2008 (UTC)