Talk:No Man's Land (CSI: Miami)

Lengthy plot description
I think that the plot description is too long and almost sounds like an adaptation of the episode for a book. Take this line for example:

""Eric?" Horatio whispers shakily as he starts towards the lifeless body of his friend."

I'm sorry, but I don't think it's in line with Wikipedia's style, but I won't change it as I haven't seen this episode. Jedd the Jedi (talk) 13:28, 14 April 2009 (UTC)