Talk:No Russian/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:41, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

Remember, no Russian. JAG UAR   19:41, 2 August 2016 (UTC)


 * "gameplay footage from the level was leaked on the Internet" - you sure you want to capitalise internet?
 * According to the Internet article, the word is capitalized. I'm not entirely sure if it should be, but it's a pretty minor point that I don't think is worth fretting over


 * The lead is perfect; is summarises the article well, so not issues here


 * "However, the player is never forced to partake in the massacre, and may instead let their comrades kill the civilians" - I think it's worth mentioning that the only objective of this level is to "follow Makorov's lead" (if you can source it)
 * Sadly, no of the sources mention that you only have to follow Makarov. All they say is that the player is never forced to kill the civilians and that they'll die anyway


 * "they will then get into a firefight with armed military soldiers" - I think all soldiers are from the military, so how about just soldiers or special forces. If I remember my CoD lore, they were probably just armed police
 * The source I used for that statment says "SWAT-or-local-equivalent response", so I just left it at armed soldiers


 * "A screenshot taken from "No Russian". In the screenshot..." - The caption is repetitive; I would get rid of the first sentence, as it is clear what level it's from
 * Done


 * " the game's developer and publisher respectively" - try the game's respective developer and publisher
 * Done


 * "and Stephen Lowe, the retired Bishop of Hulme, felt that the level was sickening" - this should be quoted
 * Done


 * No dead links
 * No dab links

This article is well written, well sourced and compact. Once they're all clarified then this should pass. JAG UAR   19:51, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Alright, all issues have been addressed. Thanks for the review! Famous Hobo (talk) 20:33, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them so quickly! Don't worry about the internet thing. Let's promote this  JAG  UAR   20:44, 2 August 2016 (UTC)