Talk:Noam Lanir

NPOV/COI
hi cassiopea, I found this article by chance, originally intending to remove the placeholder image from the infobox. The page carried a clear POV, and a quick look at the contributions of Yaelliv, the author of and sole contributor to the page, indicated a clear COI (the only two pages that this user had contributed to were the biographies of Noam and his father). I went through and rewrote/removed substantial sections of the page to meet NPOV, WP:BIO and get rid of likely OR.

That rewrite was then gradually reverted by an anonymous editor, 212.90.207.74, whose contributions would suggest that the two editors are one and the same.

I have reverted the page to my rewritten version. If there are any aspects of the original article which you believe warrant inclusion, then please go ahead and re-add them, but given the strong indications already of COI, neutrality has to remain paramount in any contributions. haz (talk) 18:11, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

I believe now it is ok .. please check it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.116.59.192 (talk) 20:41, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

I went through and [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Noam_Lanir&diff=243441055&oldid=243408700 and rewrote some of the material, which is now very appropriate. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.114.174.66 (talk) 13:41, 14 March 2010 (UTC)