Talk:Nobody's Perfect (Hannah Montana song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 21:23, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Links
→ All up to code.
 * External

→ All up to code as well.
 * Disambiguation pages

Prose
→ "The song was written and produced by Matthew Gerrard. "Nobody's Perfect" is a synth-driven pop track that discusses the importance of overcoming mistakes." could be somethig like "Written by Matthew Gerrard and Robbie Nevil, "Nobody's Perfect" explores the importance of overcoming mistakes, while musically it is styled in synthpop. (the same as synth-driven pop and with this being said, replace those instances on the infobox and composition section; also you don't need to cover every information in the lead, in my eyes what I wrote is sufficient)
 * Lead


 * Background and composition
 * "Nobody's Perfect" was written and produced by Matthew Gerrard (you forgot Nevil)


 * More information from MusicNotes can be extracted. What's the song's metronome? What's its chord progression?


 * Release and reception
 * Was the song released as the second single or the lead single from the album? It's contradictive to the information displayed on the lead.


 * The video was obviously released before that; is there any Disney official video still in YouTube or the Disney official website (where I used to see the video for "Start All Over", good old memories...) with a date? It's good information to include here, I think.
 * Bob Waliszewski and Bob Smithouser write for Plugged In. Please write that in the text as well.


 * Charts
 * Could the information (prose) here be transcluded to Release and reception?


 * According to WP:CHARTS, the Digital Songs chart can't be included in the Single Chart template since Billboard Hot 100 is already mentioned; however a small mention of it in the prose is welcome.

Suggestions
→ This suggestion isn't really for this article as I think you're trying to make a GT out of Hannah Montana 2, so a coherent structure and uniform style is reccomended for that case. However: try to refresh your writing style and inovate it a bit. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, I'm giving you an advice as a friend and I think it could improve your writing skills even further. Instead of having always the same structure (song / album / production / music / lyrics / reception / music video / promotion), mix it up a bit to make it an engaging lead prose to attract readers into reading the article. Here's an example, for this article:

"'Nobody's Perfect' is a synthpop song by American recording artist Miley Cyrus, credited as her titular character Hannah Montana from the eponymous television series. Written by Matthew Gerrard and Robbie Nevil—with production done by the former—it was released as the second single from Hannah Montana 2 on May 15, 2007 by Walt Disney Records. (...)"

I really hope you don't take this the wrong way and realize I'm just trying to help you a bit. Not that you really need it but still...


 * Don't worry, I completely understand what you're saying and I certainly appreciate your advice! It's always good to shake it up every now and then!

History

 * April 19, 2014 — Review (start/conclusion)