Talk:Nobody Knows Me/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:36, 6 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Info box
 * I'm pretty sure that remix covers for clubs do not count as artwork.


 * Use the time duration and date templates, like on "S&M (song)" for example


 * Dance should be before electronic, as D is before E


 * Remove the A-side and B-side parameters. There aren't any so a bit pointless having them there.


 * Lead
 * It was released as a club single in the United States → I don't think labels release songs as "club singles" with the intention of it only being played in clubs. The info box says promotional single, so I think this is what you should go with.


 * "Nobody Knows Me" carries on the main theme of American Life → Does it? This needs a bit more explanation.


 * with its concept of "nothing", and is an electronic and dance song, with vocoder effects, spacey synths and a bubbly bass. Lyrically, Madonna rejects tabloid culture's "social disease", denouncing both TV and magazines. → Full stop after "nothing". Join the last bit about genres with the lyrics into one sentence. At the moment, this isn't making sense to me.


 * who called it as a highlight from American Life → many of whom called it


 * on the Hot Dance Club Play chart of Billboard. → on the US Hot Dance Club Play chart.
 * topped the Hot Dance Singles Sales → topped the US Hot Dance Singles Sales chart


 * and also charted on the Australia Club Chart → and peaked at number 49 on the Australian Singles Chart. (I can't find anything on here about an AUS Club CHart and I've never heard of it)
 * Madonna did a solo performance of the song on her Re-Invention World Tour in 2004. → What do you mean solo performance??

More to come...
 * Calvin, finish off the review, then I will start addressing them. — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 09:16, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
 * I corrected some of them.  Jorn  talk 16:20, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
 * You need to provide me with a source for the AUS Club Chart. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   11:38, 28 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Recording and composition
 * at West Hollywood → in West Hollywood


 * The second and third paragraph can be one.


 * The source for electronic and dance says "electro-based/dance-oriented". Based and oriented do not make them of the genre, so they need to be removed.


 * Remove "According to the sheet music published at Sheetmusicplus.com, "


 * Critical reception
 * This is just full of really short quote sentences. There is no flow between them at all.
 * ✅ Better now?


 * References
 * MTV publisher is Viacom

On hold —  AARON  &bull; TALK   11:46, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * Passing —  AARON  &bull; TALK   09:09, 1 May 2013 (UTC)