Talk:Nobody Wants to Be Lonely/GA1

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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 15:53, 9 January 2022 (UTC)

Reading now, comments follow soon! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 15:53, 9 January 2022 (UTC)

Lead
 * The article is about three versions of this song, but it is not always completely clear to which of these versions information does relate:
 * infobox image could have a caption specifying the version
 * The accompanying music video was directed by American director Wayne Isham – Based on the previous sentence, this must be about the "original version of the song". However, I think it might be about the re-recorded version?
 * Why does the infobox only seems to be mostly about the duet version? (Information on the other versions seems incomplete)
 * while the production was handled by Walter Afanasieff. – but, according to the infobox, only of the duet album?
 * A Spanish-language solo version of the song, entitled "Sólo Quiero Amarte" – how was this released? Another single of the album?
 * Danny Lopez – link in lead and body
 * I don't think there is an article for Danny Lopez. ResPM  (T&#x1F508; &#x1F3B5;C) 19:08, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * OK, in that case, could you briefly introduce them (e.g., "music producer Danny Lopez" or whatever is the case, to get some idea who that is? --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:34, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * including Eli Zamora and Madeline Consoer – If they do not even have an article, are they relevant enough to be mentioned in the lead?

Main text
 * the Latin American edition of the album. – same release date?
 * December 2000, for the 11th – comma too much?
 * in an online message – "online chat"?
 * The source says "online message", so it's best to leave it as it is. ResPM  (T&#x1F508;&#x1F3B5;C) 19:08, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Right, I misread the source. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:34, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Additionally, CD singles were launched – containing the duet?
 * Musically, "Nobody Wants to Be Lonely" is a mid-tempo pop song and power ballad, – but only the duet, right? Ah, I see it is mentioned in the next sentence, but it should specify "duet version" right in this sentence here I think, otherwise it confuses.
 * I think we need to attribute all quotes to their respective author: is a love song about "heartbreak" and "longing" and following.
 * and noted it "perfect" performance – "its perfect performance" or "it perfects performance"? --Jens Lallensack (talk) 18:02, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I would love to know more about the actual music: Key, metre, instruments used, etc?
 * it is Martin's most recent number-one single – We should avoid "recent" per MOS:RELTIME
 * a historical castle – that is not a castle, that might be a palace. The big question is: Which place? Isn't there any source that specifies this?
 * Unfortunately there is no data about the exact place, all we know is that it was filmed somewhere in Florida. And about "castle" or "palace", it is actually defined as a "castle" in the source. I am going to add this reference too, which has named it a "castle" as well. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 17:18, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * The music video seems to have been shot the Miami Biltmore Hotel. Not a castle at all. I don't have a reliable source at hand, and if you can't find one, please just remove the word "castle" here, it is definitely a mistake. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:42, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for devoting your time on it. We have addressed the issues. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 18:36, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * That's it! Please ping me once my above suggestions are addressed! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 18:28, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks! One open point left (the "castle") which I think really needs fixing, after that I am ready to promote! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:42, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Should I change it to "palace"?
 * No, its not a palace either (my first guess was wrong), it is the Miami Biltmore Hotel (which has been a hotel from the start) … But we can't state this without a source, unfortunately. Without a source, I think you have to change to "building", because only this is covered by the existing sources (hotels and castles are both buildings). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:12, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Done آرمین هویدایی (talk) 21:02, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments
, I've struck the items I've taken care of and will start adding any links to the Credits section. If you add more linked personnel to the body, please remember to de-link them later. Please ping me if you have any comments. ResPM (T&#x1F508;&#x1F3B5;C) 19:08, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Okay, that's taken care of. You should double-check them to make sure I didn't link the wrong person by accident. ResPM  (T&#x1F508;&#x1F3B5;C) 19:28, 9 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for helping me on this article, I have no further comments. I will just add a newly published ranking list to the music video section now. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 17:18, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Looks good, as does the rest of the article. If you're all set, ping the review so they can check it out. ResPM  (T&#x1F508;&#x1F3B5;C) 17:55, 11 January 2022 (UTC)