Talk:Norcliffe Norcliffe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:40, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:40, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * This is a pretty short article, I suggest that you delete the ones in the main body that duplicate those in the lede.
 * Removed some of the more common links from the body, but left some I think are worth repeating despite the length of the article


 * surgeon, with it for a while being thought that he would die from his wound awkward
 * Reworded.


 * Add OCLC numbers for all sources that lack them or an ISBN
 * Done.


 * Short and sweet.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:03, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi, thanks for the review, I'll get to these shortly. To clarify, what exactly do you want me to delete from the main body? Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 16:03, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I can't imagine why you can't figure what I meant based on what I actually said! The duplicate links is what I meant.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:21, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Responses above! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 15:04, 29 January 2023 (UTC)