Talk:Norma Belleza

Comments regarding your sandbox article
Hi Ascension221, I read your article already. You were not able to cite your references correctly by the way. I suggest that you read the guidelines for writing references: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners You should also delete the first subsection of your article, "Ascension", as it is not relevant to your article's subject. I think it should belong to your user page instead. I also suggest writing the "Achievements and Recognition" subsection of your article in a tabular form to make it easier to understand. Renee1483 (talk) 00:35, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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Please put more information on See Also, Thank you! Kikomori012 (talk) 01:03, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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Good Day Sir, the article is well prepared. Good job keep up the good work. SupermanKael (talk) 01:12, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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GOOD JOB Wataru43 (talk) 01:19, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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Hi, I've already ready your sandbox and it was very interesting. Bolero24 (talk) 01:22, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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Hello, your sandbox is well prepared, but I see you have several red links. I suggest you remove them (the links, not the words or names).Zipwerks (talk)

Comments from Rrrrraymond
Hello, i like your sandbox. I found it very interesting and informative. Rrrrraymond (talk) 01:49, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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Hello. Please fix some of your grammar and cite your references properly. Thank you. Anillaj (talk) 02:22, 7 April 2015 (UTC)