Talk:Norman C. Deno/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 00:54, 28 April 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello Thriley, I'll be taking up the review for this nomination and will present it to you shortly. I hope you find my feedback helpful. Tayi Arajakate  Talk 00:57, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

 * Perhaps the lines "He researched the biochemical reactions that underlie the germination of all seeds and self-published a number of books that combined his scientific results. He published 150 papers in Chemistry and 20 papers in horticulture. Over the course of his career, Deno performed germination research on plant species from 150 families, 800 genera, and 2500 species." could be re-written as "He researched the biochemical reactions that underlie the germination of all seeds, performing germination research on plant species from 150 families, 800 genera, and 2500 species over the course of his career. Deno authored 150 papers in Chemistry and 20 papers in horticulture, and self-published a number of books that combined his scientific results." Note that this is just a suggestion and upto your discretion, I just think it would make more sense to club his research together and then add a line on his publications.
 * I've made the changes. Sorry it took so long to get around to this. Silver  seren C 21:14, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

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