Talk:Normandie-class battleship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 17:29, 9 May 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * prose:  (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * 2) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments
1. Bretagne class. Suggest - Wiki link
 * This is linked in the first sentence of the Development section.

2. Béarn, was equipped four Parsons turbines. Suggest - Béarn, was equipped with four Parsons turbines

3. and a top speed of 21 knots. Suggest - and had a top speed of 21 knots

4. which plans to increase. Suggest - with plans to increase

5. No description of the picture in the Construction and Cancellation section.

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 17:31, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Everything else should be addressed, thanks for catching my silly typos :) Parsecboy (talk) 21:51, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Passed. Good job Parsec. Thurgate (talk) 22:10, 9 May 2012 (UTC)