Talk:Norsk Spisevognselskap/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 20:32, 10 April 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:33, 10 April 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Instead, it partly constructed a tourist hotel in the station building at Oppdal Station... needs a mention of the partner in this development, as otherwise the sentence is inconclusive.❌
 * I don't think I get what you mean, the operation was carried out by NSS through the Ministry of Transport and Communications. -- Eisfbnore talk 14:33, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
 * As of 2011, the state railways handles the catering service on trains by procurement. Do you mean tendered contracts? ✅
 * The lead doesn't summarise the last section fully.❌
 * I made a number of copy-edits.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Referencing is good, sources appear RS, no evidence of OR. Assume good faith for off-line sources and those on-line in Norwegian.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * What happened to ReitanNarvesen? Who did it sell the rights to? As noted on the talk page, a little more about the company executives would be good, if it can be found. ❌
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:56, 10 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Gimme ten minutes, please? -- Eisfbnore   talk 18:51, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, sorry, I'm in another time zone so I actually have two hours left to go! -- Eisfbnore   talk 18:52, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok hold extended until 20 April, will that do? Jezhotwells (talk) 21:07, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
 * There still remain un-addressed points, so I shall not be listing this article. Please work on these points and then re-nominate. Jezhotwells (talk) 00:10, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I hope I have solved all these isssues by now. -- Eisfbnore talk 10:38, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, sorry, I'm in another time zone so I actually have two hours left to go! -- Eisfbnore   talk 18:52, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok hold extended until 20 April, will that do? Jezhotwells (talk) 21:07, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
 * There still remain un-addressed points, so I shall not be listing this article. Please work on these points and then re-nominate. Jezhotwells (talk) 00:10, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I hope I have solved all these isssues by now. -- Eisfbnore talk 10:38, 28 May 2011 (UTC)