Talk:North Carolina Highway 124/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 420Traveler (talk · contribs) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Review

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Review coming soon. -420Traveler (talk) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Upgraded to C Class! -420Traveler (talk) 17:00, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Lede

 * I would add last sentence in first paragraph up further. Example: "Entirely within Edgecombe County, it travels east from NC 42 near Bridgersville......"
 * Describe US 258 as "U.S. Route 258 (US 258)"
 * I'd say northeast of Bridgersville because that's how it looks on a topo map, but I may be wrong.
 * "until 1963 or 1964" would "until sometime between 1963 and 1964" sound better?
 * In infobox, I would put circa 1933 since it was between 1931 and 1933.

Route description

 * Once again with Bridgersville.
 * Also, will need a topo map reference for Bridgersville since Google doesn't show it.
 * "NC 124 begins by" Remove the word "begins".
 * "It intersects" change the "it"s to something else.
 * "At the intersection, NC 124 turns to the northeast. It continues for 3 miles (4.8 km) through a rural area to its eastern terminus at NC 42 and NC 43 near Cobbs Crossroads." I would remove "At the intersection" and combine two sentences.
 * "3 miles" change to "three miles"
 * Put references in order.
 * Add link to Annual average daily traffic.
 * For Google reference, make the map pop up as satellite map.

History

 * Put references in order.
 * "6 miles" change to "six miles" for all under 10.
 * Add current state map as a reference after last sentence.

"Travelled six miles" add in approximately or roughly. Then I'll pass it. -420Traveler (talk) 15:53, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Here is round 1, let me know if you have questions. -420Traveler (talk) 13:13, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
 * @420Traveler I think I have completed everything. Let me know if you see anything else! Ncchild (talk) 19:32, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Looks good, just a couple things: "near Old Sparta" add what direction it is from it. And add that in the lede too;


 * Both should be done! Thank you once again for reviewing! Ncchild (talk) 02:16, 9 June 2022 (UTC)